Today at writing time, the pens group were learning to use the structure of writing a recount. They had to include an opening sentence, time connectives, feelings and a closing sentence. There was a lot to remember and they all did a great job. We chose Evie's story to be read out for our blog today because she worked hard to include a closing sentence and it was an interesting story for her audience. Next time, she will need to try and include some time connectives and then it will be an AWESOME recount. Well done Evie!
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